Sunday 3 July 2011

Zav ' s adventure


Zav loved to lie and watch the mountain Camplash. It had been 2 years his dad had died. One bright afternoon zav  as every day lied down when his mum and sister called for help but zav did not get up and help he just lied. When he woke he saw a pile of hay. He thought that they had worked very hard.

Then when he got up and walked home he did not see his mum calling him. As soon as he looked - up he saw an old man. That old man said: hallow young man. I know where you’re going.

He new that he is going home. How did you know that! He show -ted. I know every thing my man laughed. Let me show you some places. So they set of to a cave where it was full of tules. There were lots of people but they were not people they were dwrafs. Next they went to a place where there was a blue river on the sides there were every kind of jewels. Zav asked the old man can he swims in the river. The old man asked did zav work hard .  Zav said no so he said zav could not but if he worked hard he would take him. But zav said it was time for him to go. And he went. The end.

By Anya (Jan, 2011).    

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